Do you like the song I wrote?

Wake Up Call (Tgirl Remix) by Livia Diamond

original song performed by Hayden Panettiere

1st verse:

I'm tired of bein' treated like your homeboy
dude, I aint your bro
You think you're so d@mn cool and funny
crackin' them sexist jokes
you're the only one laughin'
but I politely force a smile
it aint right how you treat women
like a big steamin', stinkin' pile
boy you need a lesson
in sensitivity 101
what kinda girl you think I am?
who's side you think I'm on?
you think I like your piggish ways
boy you're so dead wrong
you make me feel so uneasy
when you sh!t on those I can relate
the way I feel you might as well have
spit in my d@mn face
you make things hard for women
even worse when they're trans
and what's $crewed up the most is
I already placed my heart in your hands

And...

chorus:

I think you need a wake up call
you're way too comfortable
you tend to think we're brothers
when that's not how it is at all
I think I might need to leave
till you see the woman in me
if you don't like it tough sh!t
that's the way it's gotta be

Boy you need a wake up call
you're way too comfortable
you tend to think we're brothers
when that's not how it is at all
I think I might need to leave
till you see the woman in me
if you don't like it tough sh!t
that's the way it's gotta be

2nd Verse:

Boy I don't wanna hear
'bout all those h0es you banged
that might impress your homies
but to me it only means one thing
you just wanna play games
you take advantage and break hearts
you're only 'bout your own selfish gain
don't give a d@mn 'bout who you leave scarred
if it aint a poor naive girl you toy with
you f*** a sl^t who's just as empty as you
I know I'm comin' off as a jealous b!tch
but every bit I say is true
we share so much history
and as I friend I have your love
(so you say)
but my feelins go alot more deeper
and friendship just aint enough
boy your point of view
I'll never understand
you keep sex and love separate
but it's so much better hand in hand

(chorus)

3rd Verse:

Boy I don't like it
when you don't call and stay gone for days
I know I'm not your girlfriend
but it gets under my skin anyway
I understand you're busy
goin' out and livin' your life
but it's like you forget about me
and you know damn well that aint right
you used to jump out your seat for me
just to answer the phone
now all I get is busy signals
or you're just not at home
you're probly up in some chick
or gettin' drunk and startin' fights
I'm supposed to be your bestfriend
guess booze and p**** be #1 in your life
I don't understand
if you were my man I'd treat you so good
(oh, so good)
if you'd let me I'd make you happy
I'd give you all that I could

(chorus)

4th Verse:

Boy be easy on me
when we pretend-fight and play
you hurt me and my feelings
when you act like an @ss and get carried away
I don't like your childish pranks
nor your sarcastic jokes
if a stranger did the same sh!t
I'd f***in' punch'em in the throat
you might think I'm lame
but that's not how I have fun
I'd rather see your gentle side
and not actin' so g0dd@mn dumb
I like our deep conversations
it's rare but oh so sweet and real
that's what keeps me glued to you
and the reason for the love I feel
I'm tired of bein' treated like your homeboy
dude, I aint your bro
I wish I was your shorty
I made this song to let you know
you think you can do and say whatever
without me feelin' any disrespect
you add insult to injury
and I need to put you in check

(chorus)
So what do y'all think? It only took a day and a half to write. It's
my first song that I've actually completed. I been going through some
things, so it was easy to write. I feel really good right now. :)